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Re: Runemaster
I really think you could do something with this, but I'd like to make a few suggestions. First of all, make sure you proofread. Here, look at this. A large ...
Apr 20, 2006 -
Re: "The Creation of Adam"
Though I salute your efforts, you really should drop the whole verb+name=dialogue. "whined James"? "questioned James"? "he exclaimed?" These are allright in moderation, but if you use them too much ...
Apr 20, 2006
